Monday 24 December 2012

Uhh story in making... :'D



The story with no name... and still in progress
Began writing this one in the middle of the night and alot of parts are still left to be written inbetween everything that you will read. <3 enjoy


Screams resounded in a once peaceful village; someone had awoken a beast never meant to exist in this world. In a fiery rage it destroyed whatever that showed a sign of life… down to the last child. 

Black smoke was rising from every building and alleyways were filled with burned corpses of the villagers who once lived there. Stone structures had been smashed into pieces along with the people residing inside them. It was recklessly tossing its paws around in the air for prey.

With one of the beast’s poisonous claws in his stomach a young man cried out in a despairing voice. His consciousness began to fade as the poison rushes through his veins. Helplessly it was crushing the body of this young man who had a whole life ahead of himself and with a fate yet to be revealed. The beast threw away the corpse as if it was a thin weightless leaf and left a path of destruction behind. The beast was horned like a bull and had taken the shape of a rabid wolf, but its sheer bodily size was greater than most manmade machines and constructions. Eyes gleaming like torches in the darkest cave it pierced and carved fear around itself. This creature later came to be named a fiend, one of the servants of the madness that had begun to awake in this corrupted world.

His fate was calling from deep within… the man who was supposed to be dead. Awoke from a certain death in such a way that even the goddess of this land couldn’t predict. The corpse the beast had thrown away was still breathing, gasping for the essence of life. His name was Luéi, son of a master blacksmith, deeply rooted into the Elven kin… a forbidden relation between man and a magical being. He was one of the only survivors among another young man who had taken shelter in a cave just outside the village’s protective granite walls.

A journey of exile and discovery was set upon these two young men with a quest so secret that even the king wouldn’t hear a bird whispering about it.  

“The sun was slowly rising behind the hills of dawn as two young men in tranquility walk down the narrow paths of a mesmerizing town square. Here plants and rare trees drowsily grow beside the ever elegant highly set waterfalls. Just one time I heard of a dreamscape just like this. It existed in the stories told by my late father and that fair place was called Leavena, the capital of Elves.

Dreamily Luéi gazed the beautiful landscape around him. Why did I ever regret leaving my hometown? To see and experience something like this is worth more than anything I could ever have dreamt of. He thought for himself. As he leapt deeper into his imagination Teil placed a hand on his shoulder. 

“Luéi are you lost in thought again” he said and laughed. Luéi lifted his head and looked at the man he had shared his childhood with. Teil, the son of the council head in the small town they came from, was a chipper and loved creature. Unlike Luéi, who hardly ever took his eyes of the storybooks in his study, Teil was a young man with a passion of weapons and adventure. Once he gets Luéi out of his study they usually end up in trouble. One time they snuck out of the town roaming around in the nature around them until dusk.

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